Talk:Flower
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50 + vegetables name
[edit]There are many different types of vegetables name, but some common ones include: Cauliflower Broccoli Cabbage Brinjal Apple Gourd round bottle gourd Pumpkin Colocassia Root Lotus root Lady Finger This is just a small selection of the many types of vegetables that are available. Each type of vegetable has its own unique taste and nutritional benefits, and they can be prepared in a variety of different ways. Some popular ways to prepare vegetables include roasting, sautéing, grilling, and steaming. It’s also worth noting that many vegetables are also used in traditional dishes from around the world, for example eggplant in ratatouille, sweet potatoes in sweet potato pie, okra Harendradatta (talk) 06:51, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
Non-angiosperms in main image
[edit]The article's main image contains 4 images of non-flowers: reproductive structures of Picea abies, Pinus pinaster, Equisetum arvense, and Cycas revoluta, none of which are flowering plants. 171.66.12.183 (talk) 22:18, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
- Well spotted - that's been fixed now. Junglenut |Talk 23:08, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
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"I Bet Your Mother Would Be Proud Of You"- Frank Ocean.... WhoBeKnockingOnTheirDoor (talk) 17:24, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
Not done: Your request doesn't seem to be relevant, provided the page. If I am misunderstanding, feel free to reply with a more specific proposition. Urropean (talk) 18:39, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: Dracophyllum (talk · contribs) 12:45, 23 April 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 16:08, 23 April 2025 (UTC)
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Ok, to work.
Lead[edit]Morphology[edit]
Development[edit]Function[edit]
Pollination[edit]
Fertilisation and seed development[edit]
Seed dispersal[edit]
Evolution[edit]
Colour[edit]
Taxonomy[edit]Uses[edit]In culture[edit]Scope[edit]
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[edit]- The integration of form and function, discussed repeatedly and in detail above, has not been addressed. See there for comments.
- Clarity has been improved with glosses but infelicities remain, e.g.
Following the formation of a zygote it begins to grow...
- what's "it"?Flowers often exhibit colour.
- "are often colourful."the carpel and thecal organisation. It is a covering for the ovule...
- what's thecal organisation, sounds like electing a pope? What's "It" in that sentence?tenuinucellar, and unitegmic ovules
- that is way above Ordinary Joe's capabilities, and probably way past most biology degrees nowadays. I could easily give a dozen more examples. Please read through the whole article with your OJ hat on.
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[edit]All are from Commons and plausibly CC or PD licensed.
- "The fertilisation cycle in angiosperms[note 1]" combines a complex diagram with basically hidden text and a mix of Roman and Arabic numerals. Combined with the "Diagram of a flower, with the pollen tube labeled PG" (and a whole lot of other Capital Letter labels unexplained, in an image we already criticised) is nowhere near the simplicity and clarity we need to achieve (in a single diagram). Further, the life-cycle is basically off-topic, as we agreed earlier. We need one simple story for this short subsection. I'm quite happy to help with drawing and labelling a diagram.
- To save faffing about, I've boldly constructed a really Average Joe-level diagram and put it in the article. Feel free to do with it as you like (including editing it or making a better one).
- Looks pretty good, thanks Dracophyllum 20:53, 26 April 2025 (UTC)
- To save faffing about, I've boldly constructed a really Average Joe-level diagram and put it in the article. Feel free to do with it as you like (including editing it or making a better one).
- I'm not convinced that Apple development is a good choice, as the pome is an odd "fruit" with enormous receptacle. Why not use something plain like a pea or bean?
- It's the best I could find, also I think it shows the ovary > fruit transition well. Dracophyllum 20:54, 26 April 2025 (UTC)
- To be clear, both images in 'Seed development/Fruit development' are way too specialised for this context. We have by intention two short simple paragraphs setting 'Flower' in context (they're what happens after the flower has fallen, i.e. they are on the edge of or just outside our scope here). Those need to be accompanied, if at all, by something very small and simple, not two enormous graphics full of off-topic detail and technical terms like micropylar, synergids, megagametophyte, polar nuclei, antipodals, chalazal end. None of that stuff is in the text (quite rightly), and we don't want it in images either. I suggest we just remove the two images (File:Embryosac-en.svg, File:Development of apple fruit.jpg). The image I just made actually mentions 'seed development' on the side, which could be all we need here; if not, we could have a second new image for "seed/fruit development from the flower'. Maybe I've just given myself the job of doing that. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:20, 27 April 2025 (UTC)
- It's the best I could find, also I think it shows the ovary > fruit transition well. Dracophyllum 20:54, 26 April 2025 (UTC)
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[edit]- Feldkamp, Hämäläinen, Harder, Lengyel, Mount, Norsworthy, Symon, Traveset, and Vittoz are all now unused.
- Spot-checks [43a], [64], [88], [119] ok.
- Links to Worldcat are not necessary (primary pub. details are sufficient) and are disliked by many editors.
Summary2
[edit]- Article is still not ready, see comments. (Reply there, not here).